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Recommended debut novel: Storytellers by Bjorn Larssen

7/1/2019

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PictureNorthern lights photo by Hallgrimur P. Helgason. For more on cover design (by the author) visit
​​​Bjorn Larssen’s debut novel, Storytellers, captures the sights, sounds, and smells of early 20th century small-town Iceland and weaves a mystery that shows the complex, contradictory motivations in the human heart. Larssen’s tale shifts effortlessly from 1920’s Iceland (“Now”) to a romantic saga from a generation earlier (“Then”), told by a stranger to the book’s protagonist, Gunnar Karlsson.

Gunnar, a reclusive alcoholic blacksmith, reluctantly offers shelter to the stranger, Sigurd, who has injured his ankle on his way to a destination he refuses to divulge. In return for Gunnar’s spartan hospitality and his promise not to tell anybody Sigurd is there, Gunnar’s visitor tells a several-nights'–running story about an Icelander who emigrates to America, snatches up an American bride, and brings her back to Iceland. Gunnar’s promise to keep Sigurd a secret becomes increasingly difficult as women from the nearby village descend on Gunnar, determined to change him from a bachelor and a heathen into an upstanding (marriageable) citizen. Every time somebody drops in, Sigurd hides…but why?

Larssen’s clean, clear descriptions pull Iceland’s climate close as a damp blanket. When Juana, the American bride, arrives at her sweetheart’s village she notes, “The lack of trees was disconcerting. Surely there must be a forest somewhere nearby, she thought, as she climbed to the top of the mossy hill to better see her surroundings. Even the hill itself was strange. The soil was brick-red, then yellow, even pink. The few purple flowers that sprang up between the rocks were new to her…Both the ocean and the sky spread endlessly in front of her. To her left, the weather was clearing, and the water reflected the blue sky; to her right, clouds were gathering and the ocean looked cold and unfriendly…there was no church, no fields, not even fences!...The frosty wind whipped her mercilessly, and she had to hold on to her dress. Was this really it?” When Juana sees the Northern Lights, however, she gains an appreciation for her new home: “…her mouth opened in shock. Something that resembled green fire danced in the sky. The colors moved faster, then slower. They disappeared, then reappeared, regrouping stronger, covering the stars…. ‘Is this magic?’ she whispered. ‘Is it mountains changing shape? Is the sky burning?’….It was at that moment that the realization struck her, raising goosebumps on her skin: she had been living her adventure without even noticing. She was surrounded by magic, a prize more valuable than any jewel, more astounding than any story she had read before.”

Storytellers has a nice balance of description and conversation along with deft touches that delineate character as clearly as a die-cut stamp. Detail and humor give the story sparkle, while the machinations of the village women give the reader an urge to rescue Gunnar.

Also gripping is Larssen’s personification of depression, “the darkness” that plagues Gunnar and partly explains his need to self-medicate with moonshine. “Gunnar stared at the boiling pot, trying to gather enough strength to finish Sigurd’s meal. Sometimes splitting impossible tasks into smaller ones helped. Stand up. Pull the pot off the fire. Burn your fingers. Swear. Drain the potatoes. Mash them…no, too much, too fast. Reach for the masher. Move it up and down. Make a plate. Walk towards the room…Listen to the clock mercilessly bringing his death closer with each tick and tock.” Later: “He had no feelings, no hope, no choice. The darkness stood next to Gunnar, with her hand extended. He knew this would be their final encounter, the one that would never end. It felt as if the darkness was another person next to him, and he slowly turned his head to see…But there was nothing out of the ordinary. Perhaps the air was even more stale, the sky and grass greyer. He looked at Hallgrimur’s sheep without much interest. Little dots in the distance, some of them white, some brown. Unimportant and inconsequential. Like you, the darkness remarked.”

Two things detract a smidge from this page-turner; the first is an elf that appears for no apparent reason and could be dismissed as an hallucination—except Gunnar’s dog sees it too. But then the elf disappears without a why or a wherefore (more on him later). The other minor distraction is occasional 21st century diction bubbling up (“gross her out,” “too weird,” “blown away,” “do their thing”).

Nevertheless, this delightful pressure cooker offers its small-town characters an assortment of escapes: adultery, attempted murder, plots, witches, arson, blackmail, and fratricide.

In addition, Larssen crafts dead-on observations of human nature. When Gunnar briefly escapes small-town intrigue for a day of shopping in the big city, he notes, “Perhaps Reykjavik wasn’t so bad after all? It felt good to be a stranger, surrounded by other strangers, none of whom inquired about his religious views, tried to marry him, or asked questions about his money.” Another character pre-plans every detail of every encounter to ensure he will make the right impression: “…he would show up unannounced, blinking in the spring’s sunshine, overwhelmed by the beauty of everything. His hand would go up to cover his mouth at the sight of the church and dwelling, even if it was nothing but a painted shed. His passion and modesty would be noticed and praised….”

And there is a generous sprinkling of humor. Gunnar remarks at one point, “I just don’t like time. It’s bad for you.” And, later, “At least right now it was neither raining nor snowing outside, which Gunnar could tell by the fact that it wasn’t raining or snowing inside either.”

Author Bjorn Larssen was born in Poland, lives in the Netherlands, and is stone-cold in love with Iceland. He has a MS in Mathematics, has worked as a graphic designer and a blacksmith, and claims to have met an elf (which may explain why an elf appears in this book: perhaps Larssen owed him a boon?).

Larssen’s Storytellers takes you to an island in the North Atlantic a hundred years ago and sets you down in a village that may be surprisingly similar to your own home town. Recommended.


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A silly chat about word choice

8/31/2014

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What did you think when you saw the word “silly” in the title? Did you think this post would be lighthearted? Maybe funny? Perhaps you thought this would be a post you could do perfectly well without, like a video of cats playing patty cake.

Not so fast. This post could help you write better, so that whatever you compose at work or school is crisp, clear, clean, and accurate, making you the Doyen(ne) of Diction, the Wizard of Word Choice, the Viceroy of Verbs. Let me show you what I mean:

You can go to the fair.

You may go to the fair.

You should go to the fair.

Three identical sentences, but when you swap out the verbs, the meaning changes. “You can go to the fair” gives you casual permission to attend. Or it means you are capable of going—you have a car, right? (We could get into emphasis—YOU can go to the fair but I’ve got to stay home and milk the cows; You can GO to the fair but you won’t like it; you can go to the FAIR, but not to the rodeo—but let’s keep it simple for now.)

“You may go to the fair” is more formal. It’s parental-type permission: you’ve made a request, your request has been considered and weighed against your faithfulness in performing your appointed tasks along with your avoidance of transgressions, and you have been found worthy of receiving Fair Attendance Permission.

“You should go to the fair” is advice. Feeling sad? You should go to the fair, eat a couple corn dogs, ride the Ferris wheel--come on, snap out of it! Or the verb “should” is a recommendation by someone who’s already been there: you should go to the fair because they’ve got a primate exhibit with an actual live Silverback gorilla who signs “Get me outa here” in ASL.

Plug in other verbs—must, might, will—and see how the meaning changes yet again. Add the adverb “not” and change it up yet again.

What’s going on here is diction, which is the choice and use of words in speaking or writing. Diction demonstrates how you were educated and whether you listened in class. It shows how you think. Diction shows whether you’re a hothead whose imprecise communiques full of errors embarrass management or a cool, careful communicator who thinks before you speak or write and therefore can be trusted to represent the company on a junket to Taiwan. Choosing the best word makes you a better employee.

You think I’m joking? Not at all. Employers say effective communication is the number one skill they want to see in employees.

 According to Us New and World Report/Money, 98 percent of employers surveyed said they consider communication skills to be essential. Kimberly Palmer adds in her article that Dan Schawbel, founder of Millennial Branding, defines communication skills as “the ability to write, compose emails, give presentations in front of others, and being able to have conversations with those across generations.” The National Association of Colleges and Employers rates “Ability to verbally communicate with persons inside and outside the organization” as the number one skill employers seek in job candidates. Also in the top 10: Ability to create and/or edit written reports. Both of those skills entail word choice.

Doctors Katharine and Randall Hansen of  Quintessential Careers say “the one skill mentioned most often by employers is the ability to listen, write, and speak effectively” and suggest a job-seeker highlight this skill on his or her resume by saying something like “Exceptional listener and communicator who effectively conveys information verbally and in writing.”

But if you say you're an exceptional communicator and it isn’t true, you will be found out, my friend, and you will be despised, shamed, and forbidden from going on the junket to Taiwan, if you ever get out of the office pool in the first place. Don’t say you can “convey ideas effectively” if you can’t, but don’t despair either. Although language is acquired over a lifetime, you can start improving your diction right now.

First, start using a thesaurus. Most computers have one built in to their editing programs, but I recommend buying a paperback thesaurus, a little one that you keep at your desk or in your backpack. Consult it regularly, even if you elect not to use any of the synonyms it lists for the initial word you chose. Why a hard copy? Because a hard copy on your desk shows the world that you care about language; because its innards may-can-should offer tangible evidence in your communications that you, my friend, are the go-to wordsmith of your organization; but most importantly, because seeing the cover will remind you to Stop and Think and Peruse before you hit Send. So buy a copy and keep it close. Go ahead—wear your heart on your sleeve. Your desk. Whatever. As a new convert to Thesaurusism, your writing may be excessively verbose or wordy at first, but pretty soon you'll throttle down to a more manageable groove.

A second way to boost your ability to use language effectively is to start reading. Turn off the TV, the computer, the video game. Read for twenty minutes to start, so you don’t get twitchy. Read on the subway instead of listening to your music—or in addition to it. Read just before bed. Listen to a book on tape on your commute or your daily run. There are plenty of ways to get words into your life, and the payoff is astonishing.

Lifehack says reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body, and among the ten benefits it suggests reading can bring to your life is vocabulary expansion, which aids word choice. (Lana Winter-Hebert also says reading improves your focus, makes you more analytical, and reduces stress. Those are decent rewards for an activity that doesn’t have to cost you a dime and can be done anywhere, anytime.)

These two little things—reading regularly and using a thesaurus--will improve your ability to communicate in less than a year. If they don’t, I can-may-should eat my hat.

But I probably won't. That would be silly.

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